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Wednesday, 3 June 2020

creepy's story by Riki

2 comments:

  1. excellent work riki maybe nect time u should make the writing better so we can see it :)

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  2. Good work riki My favorite bit was when he raged at his mum keep up the great work And maybe Next time make the writing more clear to see :)

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